• StudSpud The Starchy
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    9 hours ago

    I’m hungover. No ragrets going last night. I didn’t get up, but everyone was so welcoming anyway, they all said hello and asked about me 😭 I’m thinking of getting up next time and reading Unsent, but I hope to write something a bit less “trauma poetry” haha

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      8 hours ago

      So good, and definitely get up there next time! Your talents have been kept to us for too long haha.

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      9 hours ago

      Your very first one you posted here about the checkout chick was superbo and very relatable.

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        8 hours ago

        It was this one yeah?

        I could not sleep, awakened afraid
        Under the covers, I begged, I prayed,
        For dawn, or death, for sleep to come
        But mercy ungranted, I knew I was done.
        For I committed a most awful crime
        One for which we’ve all done time
        Exactly the same or slighty changed,
        Have we all made this same mistake?
        I went to Woolies to buy a snack,
        The cashier smiled, I smiled back
        Items scanned, transaction completed
        She said the words that have me defeated
        Smiles and waves, “Enjoy your coffee and snack!”
        “You too!” I regretfully cried back
        Unthinking, unblinking, mid-step away
        I died there, in Woolies, that very day.

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          56 minutes ago

          This reminds me. I was serving a customer who was flying to Bali the next day. I told her to enjoy her trip and she said, “You too!”. One day.