• Force_majeure123
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    1 year ago

    I don’t think the play on words works tbh. It’s a bit of a stretch and ghouled and bowled doesn’t even rhyme. I’d have never got that if you didn’t explain it. Sorry but I feel you need to know how I feel
    I believe this thread can come up with something better (let’s go brains trust!)
    Edit: something involving “boundary”?

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      1 year ago

      Nope, I appreciate the response so no need to apologise. I don’t want ‘the haunted mansion’ so I am trying to think of something else, but tis a struggle. I shall go back to my pun drawing board.