Could’ve been one sentence.
‘You are what you eat,’ the Blue Fairy told Pinocchio, who turned his gaze on the elementary school.
Removed unnecessary adjectives, they distract from the punch imo
I believe it flows better this way, too. The reader goes directly from A to B to C with a brief stop at horror between B and C, right where you want it.
Lmao if you want liberals to gear up for civil war, that’s one way to do it.
Jesus christ