Hey, I like the initiative of sharing this!

One major point stood out to me. When reading CVs I try to match the statements with the experiences. I didn’t manage to map them. Example: you improve processes - when and where?

Either adjust the statement to the stations or vice versa. For every statement you should have a recent backing.

The second thing is the title part: this will be very hot or miss depending on the reader. Either way I recommend putting explanation and title either in one paragraph or very close together. If this would’ve need on my desk and I’d be in stress I wouldn’t have read beyond it just because it looked like an isolated joke going directly into the serious next block.

Hope this helps!